Roundtable 9 READERS · 1 BOOK

Lonesome Dove

by Larry McMurtry · Historical Fiction · 1985

Nine readers took on this cattle-drive epic, and most who finished agreed Call's refusal to claim his son does more lasting damage than any death on the trail.

Cover of Lonesome Dove by Larry McMurtry
Genre
Historical Fiction
First published
1985
Length
about 945 pages
ISBN
9785237003703
RNKD readers
9

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Verdicts at a glance

No RNKD reader scores a book out of five, so there is no average here. Just 9 people saying what they thought. Each of them wrote before reading the others.

READER 01 OF 9

A Long Drive With No Safe Destination

Avi Mizrahi

Avi Mizrahi, 61

7 reviews on RNKD

DEPENDS Finished the book

SPOILERS This review discusses the whole book, including how it ends.

The first thing I check in a long journey story is not the scenery. It is the supply line. Who has water? Who knows the route? Who is responsible when the plan changes? Who is still useful when the wagon breaks, the weather turns, or the person in charge is no longer making sense? Lonesome Dove has many answers to those questions, and most of them are bad. That is part of what makes the book work.

The book begins in Lonesome Dove, a dry and almost finished settlement near the Rio Grande, where former Texas Rangers Augustus McCrae and Woodrow Call have become partners in a small cattle and livery operation. The business is half broken from the beginning. The barn has no roof, the well is unfinished, the horses are difficult, and the town itself has little to offer except heat, dust, gambling, whiskey, and Lorena Wood, the local sporting woman. Gus talks, drinks, gambles, and avoids work whenever possible. Call works from morning until dark because work is the only structure he trusts. The difference between them is more than personality. It is their answer to life.

Gus believes that life is for enjoyment, argument, women, food, and conversation. Call believes that life is a series of duties which must be completed whether anyone enjoys them or not. He is the sort of man who would keep repairing a loading dock after the shipment had been cancelled because the repair was still waiting. Gus is the sort who would sit beside him and explain why the shipment was never worth sending. I understood both men, though I trusted Call more around a horse, a river crossing, or a bad order. I understood Gus better when he said the point was not simply to survive. A man who only works and suffers may be reliable, but he is not necessarily alive.

Then Jake Spoon returns, having accidentally killed a dentist in Arkansas with a buffalo rifle and a bullet meant for someone else. Jake brings the idea of Montana, where cattle can be taken north and fortunes made. Call immediately treats the idea as a task. Gus treats it as another opportunity for talk, women, and possibly Clara Allen, the woman who rejected him years earlier and married a horse trader instead. Jake himself does not want the work. He wants the idea of Montana without the dust, the cattle, the Indians, the rivers, or the responsibility.

That is the central problem of the whole book. People keep wanting the result without accepting the work required to reach it. Call wants Montana because he has become tired of a life that no longer needs him, but he does not understand what he is chasing. Jake wants a new life but keeps making the same choices. Lorena wants San Francisco because it represents a place where her life might finally belong to her, but she keeps trusting men who promise movement and deliver another kind of confinement. The young cowboys want adventure, money, and women, but the road mostly gives them thirst, fear, injury, and graves.

McMurtry is very good at showing how ordinary work continues beside disaster. Men dig wells, repair harness, brand cattle, cook beans, sharpen knives, and argue about card games while death remains nearby. The best example is the crossing of the Nueces, when Sean O'Brien rides into a nest of water moccasins and is bitten repeatedly. The scene is horrible, but what stayed with me was the work afterward. The men carry him out, dig a grave, wrap him in a piece of wagon sheet, and then move on. There is no proper funeral because the herd is waiting and the weather is changing. Augustus says that life is short and tells the rest to kick their horses. That sounds hard, but it is also true. A cattle drive cannot stop forever for every death.

The book keeps repeating this pattern until the repetition becomes its meaning. The wagon breaks. Bolivar leaves. A sandstorm scatters the herd. A boy is killed by lightning. Lippy nearly drowns when the wagon overturns. Water moccasins kill Sean. The grasshoppers strip the prairie. Cattle go blind from thirst. A grizzly bear fights the one-eyed Texas bull. Every plan is damaged by something physical, not abstract. Mud, heat, snow, thirst, bad horses, bad roads, bad luck. A person can be competent and still lose because the environment does not care about competence.

The treatment of the landscape is one of the book's strengths, but it is not always a comfortable strength. The land is beautiful, and the book gives it close attention. Morning light makes the chaparral look like it has been covered with diamonds. The plains seem endless. Rivers have their own moods. Snow is strange and frightening to men who have never seen it. But this beauty exists beside conquest. Call and Gus spent years killing Comanches and other enemies of settlement, and they know, at least in flashes, what their work made possible. Gus is especially honest about it. He says they killed Indians so bankers and lawyers could arrive. Call disagrees, but he cannot fully dismiss the point.

The book does not turn that recognition into a clean moral conclusion. That is one reason I respected it. The Rangers are not presented as modern heroes, but neither are the Indian characters given much room to exist outside the fears and crimes of the white characters. Blue Duck is a genuine monster, responsible for killing, torture, rape, and the theft of children. His violence is not softened. But he also becomes the book's main image of Indian danger, while the violence done by the Rangers and settlers is more often treated as history, duty, or the price of civilization. The book knows this contradiction exists. It does not solve it.

Lorena's story is the most difficult part to read. She has been used by men since she was a girl, and McMurtry does not disguise the physical and economic facts of that life. She is not a romantic prostitute waiting for one good man. She is tired, wary, practical, and often silent because silence is safer than allowing men to imagine intimacy. Jake convinces her that he can take her to San Francisco, but he is mostly a child who wants somebody else to take care of him. Blue Duck's kidnapping is brutal, and the later violence inflicted by the Kiowas is worse. Gus rescues her, but rescue does not repair her. She remains frightened and damaged.

I was glad the book did not pretend that Gus's kindness could erase what happened. Lorena eventually stays with Clara in Nebraska, and that is the closest thing she receives to a future. Clara offers her work, a room, and a place where she is not required to sell access to her body. It is a small settlement, not a grand rescue. That is more believable and more valuable.

Clara is one of the strongest characters in the novel because she is not waiting for a man to explain her life. She loses children, cares for an incapacitated husband, manages horses, bargains with men, and sees through both Gus and Call. She understands that love is not automatically a virtue. She also understands that a person can become a burden through weakness and call it devotion. Her criticism of Call is severe but correct. He abandons Newt emotionally even while providing food, work, and protection. He does not have to be cruel to do harm. He only has to refuse responsibility for what he has done.

That refusal controls the ending. Call finally learns that Newt is his son, or at least admits what he has known for years. He still cannot say it directly. Instead, he gives Newt his horse, his gun, and his father's watch before leaving to carry Gus's body back to Texas. It is a practical handoff, the kind of gesture I would understand immediately. Quantity, time, equipment, responsibility. But it is not enough. A horse is not a name. A gun is not an apology. The watch is not an explanation.

Gus's death is painful because he remains Gus almost to the end. He refuses to lose his leg, because he refuses to live as a reduced version of himself. That decision is vain, but it is also consistent. He wants to be buried in the place where he was happiest, Clara's orchard on the Guadalupe. Call carries him there, even though the request is unreasonable and the journey nearly destroys him. The final image is not a triumph. Call buries Gus beneath a damaged sign, then returns to Lonesome Dove to find the town changed and the Dry Bean burned. Bolivar is still there, beating the dinner bell. The work continues, but the people who gave the place its meaning are mostly gone.

The book is very long, and it repeats certain ideas more than necessary. There are too many conversations about women, whiskey, cards, and what will happen in Montana. Some of the sexual material is deliberately ugly, but the repeated attention can become exhausting. The plot also depends on people making choices that any practical person would reject. Jake brings Lorena into a cattle drive without a workable plan. Lorena follows him because she wants a different life. Gus leaves her alone near Blue Duck. Call keeps driving north after the mission has stopped making sense. These are not small errors. They are the engines of the tragedy.

Still, the length gives the consequences room to accumulate. By the end, the deaths do not feel like isolated shocks. They form an inventory. Sean. Bill Spettle. Deets. Jake. Wilbarger. The unnamed settlers. The people killed by Blue Duck. The horses and cattle. Gus. The list is long enough that the original dream of Montana has almost disappeared beneath it.

Lonesome Dove is not really about reaching a new country. It is about men who keep moving because stopping would require them to account for their lives. Call reaches Montana and loses the reason to stay. Gus reaches the end still arguing with the world. Lorena does not reach San Francisco, but finds a safer place by accident. Newt reaches adulthood without receiving the truth he needed. That is the quantity, the time, and who signed: everyone paid, and nobody got the result they ordered.

This is a powerful novel, but it is not a comfortable one, and it is not a clean adventure. It is about competence failing, affection arriving late, and history being built by people who do not understand what they are building. I would recommend it to someone willing to spend a long time watching a plan become a burden. I would not recommend it to anyone expecting the West to reward good intentions. It does not. The land keeps going, the dead remain dead, and the living carry whatever they failed to say.

READER 02 OF 9

A Great Book About Men Who Cannot Stop Moving

Daniel Cohen

Daniel Cohen, 35

9 reviews on RNKD

WOULD RECOMMEND Finished the book

SPOILERS This review contains major spoilers, including the deaths of Deets, Jake Spoon, Augustus McCrae, and the ending.

Lonesome Dove is a novel about movement, but not progress. People ride north because there is supposedly better land, more money, or one last chance to become the person they meant to be. They leave towns, wives, friends, duties, and graves behind. Then the journey keeps going long after the original reason for starting has stopped making sense. That is the book’s central argument, and it is a strong one: men who define themselves by what they do next often have no idea what to do when the next thing is finished.

I liked this book more than I expected to, mostly because it understands that competence is not the same as wisdom. Captain Call is competent almost to the point of absurdity. He can organize a cattle drive, read a trail, manage a remuda, fight Indians, handle a difficult horse, and keep a group of men alive under conditions that should have killed them several times. He is also incapable of admitting what he wants, what he fears, or what he owes anyone. This is not a small character flaw. It is the engine of the novel.

Call spends his life converting emotional problems into tasks. If he feels restless, he works. If he is ashamed, he works. If another person needs him, he gives an order and calls that care. His treatment of Newt is the clearest example. Newt is almost certainly his son, and Call knows it. Gus knows it. Maggie knew it. The reader knows it. Call still refuses to say the words. He takes Newt along, trains him, gives him a gun, and eventually entrusts him with work. But he cannot give him a name.

That refusal is not presented as noble restraint. It is cowardice, and McMurtry is unusually clear about that. Call thinks acknowledging Newt would mean admitting that he once wanted something outside the rules he built for himself. He would rather leave the boy with a permanent question than revise his opinion of himself. In a book full of dramatic violence, this is one of the most damaging acts. A bullet ends a life. Call’s silence shapes one.

Newt’s story is where the novel became most emotionally effective for me. He begins as a boy who wants a gun, a horse, a place in the crew, and the attention of the men he admires. His idea of adulthood is mostly access. If he is allowed to go to Mexico, carry a pistol, ride point, or join the cattle drive, then he believes he has crossed some important boundary. The book gradually shows him that adulthood is not being included in dangerous work. It is learning what that work costs.

His friendship with Sean O’Brien is especially painful because it starts so simply. They are both outsiders. Newt has no acknowledged father and Sean has left Ireland after a childhood of abuse. They talk about home, grass, cows, and what people do in countries the other has never seen. Then Sean dies in the Nueces River after riding into a nest of water moccasins. There is no heroic rescue that fixes the situation. The men pull him out, but the snakes have already decided the outcome.

That scene works because the novel does not pretend that bravery creates fairness. Sean is not punished for being immoral or careless in any meaningful sense. He is simply unlucky. The same is true of Bill Spettle, killed by lightning, and of Deets, who is killed while trying to help a blind Indian child. The book repeatedly removes the comforting idea that good behavior produces safety. Competence improves your odds. It does not control the result.

Deets’s death is the most difficult death in the book for me. He sees the starving Indian camp and approaches with a blind child in his arms. The young warrior charges him anyway. Deets tries to show that he is not a threat, and the boy kills him. Call and Augustus shoot the boy. Everyone is wrong, and no one is entirely wrong. This is exactly the kind of encounter that turns a moral argument into a body on the ground. The settlers have displaced the Indians, the Indians have killed settlers, and individual people keep meeting one another inside a history none of them can repair.

McMurtry does not make Deets into a symbol and then leave him there. Deets is funny, vain about his name, careful with his clothes, interested in the moon, and afraid of Indians. He has a particular mind. He is more than the wise scout or the loyal Black companion. That matters because the novel is operating inside a world where Black characters are often treated as part of the machinery of white survival. Deets is given more interiority and dignity than most Western novels of this kind would offer, but the book still makes him perform enormous amounts of labor for men who never fully understand him. His death exposes the limits of their respect.

The novel’s treatment of race is not comfortable, and it should not be. Call and Augustus have spent their lives killing or displacing Indians while telling themselves they are protecting civilization. Augustus is capable of seeing the contradiction. He jokes about bankers, lawyers, settlers, and the process by which violence makes land available for someone else’s profit. Call understands the practical side of the same history but dislikes the moral implications. He wants to say that the work was necessary because he cannot admit that some of it was also conquest.

The women are generally more perceptive than the men, although the book’s world gives them fewer options. Lorena begins as a prostitute whose main ambition is to reach San Francisco because she believes a cooler place might offer a different life. Her silence is not emptiness. It is a defense built from years of men expecting access to her body and her attention. Jake mistakes her need for rescue as love and then becomes angry when she continues to have a mind of her own.

I found Jake’s relationship with Lorena convincing in a very unpleasant way. He is charming, clean, attentive, and good at making a woman feel like the answer to a question he has only just invented. He is also weak. He wants Lorena, but not the obligations that come with taking her somewhere. He wants the benefits of being needed without the work of being reliable. When he leaves her to gamble in Austin and returns to find her gone, his shock is almost funny, except that the consequences are so severe.

Lorena is not passive in the way Jake assumes. She chooses him, leaves with him, refuses to return to San Antonio, rejects his attempts to control her, and survives Blue Duck’s captivity. But survival is not the same as recovery. McMurtry does not use her suffering to produce a neat transformation. After Augustus rescues her, she is altered, quieter, and dependent on the simple safety of his presence. Clara gives her a place to stay because Clara recognizes that survival sometimes requires an environment where nobody demands a performance.

Clara is the best argument in the novel against the men’s idea that the world is made by their movement. She manages a ranch, raises daughters, deals with horses, cares for a husband who is permanently disabled, buries children, and makes practical decisions without pretending they are heroic. Her anger is not decorative. It is the response of someone who has done the work while men discussed what the work meant.

Her rejection of Call is one of the book’s most satisfying scenes. He arrives with Augustus’s corpse and expects the promise to settle the matter. Clara tells him that a living son is more important than a dead friend and that he is a coward for using duty to avoid his responsibilities. Call cannot answer because she is right. He has spent decades demanding that other people accept the consequences of their choices while treating his own choices as unavoidable facts.

The ending is intentionally cruel. Call delivers Augustus to Clara’s orchard, but he does not bring himself any closer to understanding him. He returns to Lonesome Dove alone, carrying the remains of a partnership that had outlasted its original purpose. The town has changed. The saloon is gone, Xavier is dead, and the piano has burned with him. Call is still moving, but there is nowhere meaningful left to go.

The book is very long, and it sometimes repeats its points more than necessary. I understood by the middle that Call works to avoid thinking, that Jake is charming but unreliable, that men talk about women more easily than they talk to them, and that the plains are dangerous. Some scenes could have been shorter. The repeated discussions of drowning, bears, snakes, and Indian attacks sometimes feel like the same risk being entered into a different column.

But the length also gives the novel room to show consequences accumulating. One death changes the next decision. One omission becomes another person’s burden. A man’s reputation follows him until it turns into a trap. The cattle drive is more than an adventure route from Texas to Montana. It is a long sequence of operational failures, bad assumptions, missing information, and people refusing to update their plan when reality changes. I recognized that pattern immediately, which may be why the book held my attention despite its size.

My final judgment is that Lonesome Dove earns its reputation because it is not really a celebration of the West. It is an examination of what men call purpose when they are afraid to admit they are lonely. The best characters keep moving because stopping would force them to look directly at what they have done. The worst characters keep moving because they believe consequences are for other people.

I finished the book sad, impressed, and more irritated with Captain Call than I expected. He is not a hero because he is strong. He is a tragic figure because strength became his excuse for refusing to be honest. Augustus understands this and jokes around it for years, but he cannot save Call from it. Nobody can. In the end, Call can carry a dead friend three thousand miles, but he cannot say one necessary sentence to his living son. That is the failure the whole journey was built to reveal.

READER 03 OF 9

A Fine Herd, Poor Planning, and a Lot of Dead Men

David Thompson

David Thompson, 63

7 reviews on RNKD

WOULD RECOMMEND Finished the book

SPOILERS This review discusses the whole book, including how it ends.

The book begins with Augustus McCrae watching pigs eat a rattlesnake, and that tells you most of what you need to know about its method. The world is unpleasant, funny, dangerous and practical. A man can be thinking about the decline of his working life while a horse bites him, a cook beats a dinner bell with a crowbar, or a pig tries to eat his belt. McMurtry does not separate the grand subjects from the ordinary ones. The end of the frontier is discussed alongside beans, saddle sores, bad coffee and whether a man has selected a sensible place to relieve himself.

That mixture is the main reason the novel works. It is a Western adventure about two former Texas Rangers driving stolen and gathered cattle north to Montana, but it is just as much about men who have continued doing a job after the job has disappeared. Woodrow Call is still a captain when there is no troop, no war and no sensible reason for anyone to look to him for orders. Augustus has more intelligence and more imagination than Call, but he is equally unable to settle. He talks about enjoying life while arranging his days around whiskey, cards and the next argument. Both men are living on habits formed in a country that is already changing beneath them.

Call sees the cattle drive as a practical opportunity. Montana has grass, water and land. The figures appear to work. Gather a herd, hire hands, drive north and establish a ranch. That is the sort of plan he understands. The trouble is that a plan is not the same as a reason. Call is trying to replace the work that gave his life meaning with another form of work, and the book is honest enough to show that the substitution may not succeed. He can organise a drive, but he cannot organise a purpose.

Augustus understands this before Call does, although understanding it does not make him wiser. He has an answer for everything, usually an answer that contains a joke, but his jokes serve as more than decoration. He uses talk to keep other people from seeing the places where he is uncertain. His arguments with Call are a way of maintaining the partnership. If they stop arguing, they might have to admit that they have become old men with a roofless barn, a half-dug well and no clear reason to remain where they are.

Augustus is the more appealing man, but he is not the better man in every respect. He is generous and observant. He recognises the intelligence of Pea Eye, the loneliness of Lorena, the usefulness of Deets and the damage Call has done to himself. He is also a liar, a gambler, a womaniser and a man who can turn other people’s feelings into entertainment. He knows that Lorena is attached to him, and still pays her fifty dollars after cheating her at cards for a visit that she did not really want to sell. The scene is funny in the way Augustus is funny, but there is something ugly underneath it. He has charm, yet charm is not the same thing as kindness.

Lorena’s story is one of the strongest parts of the book because McMurtry does not pretend that rescue repairs a person. She has been used, beaten, traded and abandoned. When Jake Spoon arrives, she mistakes his confidence for reliability and his attention for a promise. He talks about San Francisco, and she believes him because she needs somewhere to go. Jake does not exactly deceive her in the ordinary sense. He says what sounds good at the time, and then discovers that other people expect him to mean it. That is his particular form of cowardice.

The treatment of Lorena is also the point at which I found the book most difficult. The men’s language about sex is often crude and deliberately comic, and McMurtry is interested in the gap between what the men say and what the women endure. But some scenes are so relentless that the jokes stop providing distance. Blue Duck’s abduction of Lorena, followed by the treatment she receives from the Kiowas and the two white outlaws, is not an adventure in any meaningful sense. It is an account of a woman being reduced to an object passed between violent men. The novel does not make her suffering decorative, but it does make the reader stay with it for a long time. I found that section hard to read, and not because it was badly written.

Lorena’s recovery is one of the few genuinely convincing changes in the book. She does not become cheerful, grateful or conveniently romantic. She speaks again slowly. She accepts food, sleep and ordinary company. Clara gives her a place where she is not being bought, threatened or watched for profit. That matters more than any speech about healing. The friendship between Lorena and Betsey is particularly good because it is quiet. Betsey does not demand a story from her. She simply stays near her, which is probably the first useful thing anyone has done for Lorena without wanting something in return.

Clara is the woman who sees most clearly what the men are doing to themselves. She has buried three sons, cared for an incapacitated husband and kept a ranch running in a place where the weather and the landscape seem designed to defeat her. She is not a saint. She is sharp, impatient and quite capable of making a man feel incompetent for breathing incorrectly. But her anger has a practical basis. She knows that people die, that work still has to be done and that a promise is not automatically noble just because a man made it.

Her treatment of Call at the end is deserved. Call has spent his life believing that duty excuses emotional cowardice. He cannot claim Newt because doing so would require him to admit that he wanted something, that he had a relationship with Maggie and that he failed both her and the boy. Augustus understands this and needles him about it for years. Call responds by working harder and saying less. It is a familiar arrangement in which a man calls himself dependable while making other people carry the cost of his silence.

Newt is the character I felt most protective of. He is young, inexperienced and constantly worried that he will make a mistake in front of Call. He wants a gun, a horse, a chance to go on a raid and some indication that his life might become larger than shovelling horse dung. His first night in Mexico is frightening because it is the first time he is treated as responsible for something dangerous. The scene works because his fear is not turned into heroism too quickly. He remains a boy who is trying to act like a man.

When Call finally gives Newt the Hell Bitch, his Henry rifle and his father’s watch, it is both an acknowledgment and a failure. Call gives objects because objects are easier for him than words. Newt understands enough to know that something important has happened, but not enough to be satisfied. He wants the Captain to say it. Call cannot. He rides away having given his son valuable things without giving him his name. That is not a noble silence. It is simply the last version of the same failure.

The deaths accumulate, but they do not all have the same effect. Sean O’Brien dying among the water moccasins is horrible because the danger arrives through an ordinary river crossing. There is no grand battle, just a boy who wanted to return to Ireland and happened to ride into a nest of snakes. Deets’s death is worse because he is killed while trying to return a blind child to his people. He is not careless or ambitious. He is doing what he has always done, which is notice what needs doing and try to do it properly. His death leaves the outfit less competent and morally poorer.

Jake’s hanging is different again. It is legally understandable and emotionally miserable. He has chosen badly, first by returning to Lonesome Dove, then by bringing Lorena into the drive, then by falling in with the Suggs brothers. He does not become a killer by one clear decision. He drifts into the company of killers and tells himself he is only passing through. That is not an excuse, but it is a believable account of how people end up somewhere they did not intend to be. When he asks Newt to take his pacing horse, there is still a trace of the man he was. It does not save him, but it keeps him from becoming only a villain.

The book’s biggest weakness is that it can be too pleased with its own abundance. There are many vivid minor characters, but some of them appear only to offer another grotesque anecdote before disappearing. The repeated jokes about food, bodily functions and sexual appetite are often funny, but they also make the world feel constructed around the next story. The long middle sections occasionally become a catalogue of hardship. The reader is asked to endure another storm, another river, another argument, another death and another explanation of why the plains are dangerous.

Even so, the repetition has a purpose. The drive does not become meaningful because the men reach Montana. It becomes meaningful because the drive exposes the difference between the life they imagine and the life they can actually manage. They start with a herd and a plan. They arrive with fewer men, fewer horses, a dead friend in a coffin and a Captain who cannot admit what he has lost. Montana is not a reward. It is simply another place where work, weather and death will continue.

That is why the ending is so bleak. Call does what he promised to do, but the promise has no power to change anything. He carries Augustus back to Texas, across a distance that proves his determination and the absurdity of it. The body is packed in salt, the coffin is damaged, the wagon falls apart, and the sign for the Hat Creek Cattle Company becomes a collection of splinters. He reaches Lonesome Dove alone. Bolivar is there, beating the dinner bell as if time has not moved, but the saloon is gone and the old life has disappeared.

Call’s final exchange with Dillard Brawley is almost painfully understated. Xavier has burned the Dry Bean after Lorena left, and the piano went with it. This is not the grand conclusion to a cattle empire. It is a ruined building, a missing woman, a dead partnership and a man standing in the ashes trying to understand what happened. Call has completed the journey, but the completion does not rescue him. It only proves that he can finish a task after the reason for doing it has vanished.

I liked Lonesome Dove more than I expected to, although I did not enjoy all of it. It is too long, sometimes too pleased with its own jokes and occasionally brutal in ways that test the reader’s patience. But it has a serious understanding of competence, loyalty and the damage caused by men who confuse silence with strength. It also knows that practical work can be a form of love, even when the person doing the work cannot say so.

For me, the book ultimately became a book about people trying to keep moving because stopping would force them to look at the lives they had made. Some move because they are hopeful, some because they are frightened, and some because they have no better idea. They lose friends, horses, wives, sons and parts of themselves along the way. The most useful lesson is not to follow a grand plan. It is to notice who is beside you before the next river, storm or badly chosen horse carries them away.

READER 04 OF 9

The Work Goes On, Even When It Shouldn’t

James Wilson

James Wilson, 38

12 reviews on RNKD

WOULD RECOMMEND Finished the book

SPOILERS This review discusses the whole book, including how it ends.

Some books make you want to visit the place they describe. Others make you grateful you can close them and go home. Lonesome Dove did both to me. I wanted to see the plains, the rivers and the mountains, but for long stretches of the novel I also kept thinking that nobody in this world had ever heard of taking a day off. This is a huge, patient, funny and deeply brutal book about men who keep moving because stopping would force them to think about what they have lost.

There are major spoilers throughout.

The novel begins in Lonesome Dove, a dusty Texas settlement where Captain Call and Augustus McCrae run a failing cattle and livery operation. That description makes it sound more respectable than it is. They steal horses and cattle from Mexico, employ a former bandit as a cook, keep a dangerous mare that bites people, and spend their evenings arguing about pigs, women, food, Latin and the difference between being useful and being alive. Call works constantly. Gus drinks, talks and occasionally works when the situation becomes unavoidable. Their relationship is the engine of the book, and it works because McMurtry understands that long friendship is not the same as agreement, kindness or even good sense.

Augustus is the obvious pleasure. He is funny in a way that never needs the book to announce the joke. He treats pigs as intelligent creatures, regards Call's self-denial as a personal challenge, and can turn any practical matter into an argument. His talk is often filthy, sometimes cruel and usually aimed at a weakness he spotted before anyone else. Yet the humour does more than entertain. Gus talks because talking is how he stays in contact with the world. Call works because work is how he avoids that same contact. Neither man is as free as he imagines.

Call's idea of freedom is especially strange. He thinks he is serving duty, but his duty has become a habit with no clear object. He was once a Ranger captain protecting settlers from Comanches and bandits. Now there is no troop, no war and no real need for him to patrol the river at night. He still does it because he has been in charge for so long that he no longer knows what to do when nobody needs orders. The cattle drive to Montana gives him a purpose that looks practical but is really an attempt to restart his life without admitting that his old life has ended.

The finest example is Newt. Newt is seventeen, hardworking, eager to prove himself and desperate for Call's approval. He is also Call's son, although Call refuses to acknowledge him. The book lets the reader know this long before Newt understands it. Call does love the boy. His failure is refusing to accept what loving him requires. Maggie, Newt's mother, asks Call to say her name, and he cannot even do that. He turns away from her need, then spends years taking care of the child while refusing to call him his own. Call would call it discipline. It reads as cowardice dressed up as principle.

McMurtry is very good at showing how people inherit damage from choices made before they were old enough to understand them. Men who care for Newt raise him without ever explaining his place in the world. He grows up admiring Call, Jake Spoon and Gus, each for different reasons, and slowly discovers that the men he regards as heroes are compromised, frightened or simply absent. The night he receives his first pistol is a genuine moment of growth, but it is also a warning. Being allowed to carry a gun does not make him ready for the life the adults are sending him into.

The journey itself is built from physical difficulty rather than a tidy sequence of adventures. There is dust, heat, rain, sandstorms, lightning, mosquitoes, mud, quicksand, drowning, snakes, hunger, exhaustion and the regular possibility of being shot. The novel is at its strongest when the landscape exposes the men's lack of control. The storm that scatters the herd is not a test that can be passed through courage. The snake-infested crossing of the Nueces is worse. Sean O'Brien, who has come from Ireland with his brother, is attacked by water moccasins and dies despite the immediate efforts of Call, Gus, Pea and Deets. It is a horrifying scene because no one behaves foolishly enough to deserve it. He simply enters the wrong patch of water.

Sean's death changes the emotional temperature of the drive. The men talk about it constantly because they do not know what else to do. Newt is sick with grief and guilt, although he has done nothing wrong. Call tries to carry on because he believes moving forward is the only practical response. Gus offers jokes and a brief funeral speech. The work continues. That is the novel's repeated point, although it is never stated as a slogan. Death does not stop the cattle. It only changes who is riding beside them.

The women in the book are not simply waiting for the men to return. Lorena, Elmira and Clara all expose the limits of the men's understanding. Lorena has survived being used, traded and abandoned, but the book never treats her survival as a simple triumph. Her silence is not a charming mystery. It is a response to a life in which speaking has rarely improved her position. Jake briefly convinces her that he will take her to San Francisco, largely because he knows how to make an appealing promise. Then he becomes jealous, controlling and frightened of the responsibility he has created. When Blue Duck abducts her, Jake is in a saloon playing cards. That is the clearest possible judgment on him.

Lorena's rescue by Gus is one of the book's most difficult threads. Gus is kind to her, protects her and gives her room to recover, but he is not a simple saviour. He also buys sex from her, and later persuades her into another encounter by cheating at cards. The book lets his affection and his exploitation exist side by side. I found that uncomfortable in a useful way. Gus is better than most of the men around Lorena, but "better than most" is a very low standard. His kindness does not erase the power he has over her or the fact that he is still making decisions about her life.

Clara is the strongest character in the novel, although she appears relatively late. She has built a household, raised children, traded horses and endured grief without letting the men around her turn her into a symbol of suffering. Her life with Bob is not romantic, but it is substantial. When a horse kicks him in the head and leaves him helpless, she cares for him with resentment, loyalty and exhaustion at once. She does not pretend that love makes the work pleasant. Her refusal to flatter Call or excuse Augustus gives the novel its clearest moral intelligence.

Clara's relationship with Augustus is painful because it rests on genuine feeling and bad timing. She loves him, but she also knows he would bring chaos into her life. He wants her partly because he has spent years imagining her, not because he has understood what living with her would require. When he leaves her again, choosing to continue north with Call, the decision is not heroic. It is consistent with the man he has always been. He loves movement, risk and the possibility of another horizon. He is not built for staying.

The final stretch is where the novel earns its reputation. Deets is killed by a starving Indian boy after trying to return a blind child to his people. It is an awful death, made worse by the fact that Deets does not misunderstand the situation until the last moment. He is trying to help. Call later carves a careful memorial for him, acknowledging his thirty years of service and his courage. It is one of the few times Call lets his respect become visible.

Jake's death is different. He has made a series of bad choices, and eventually rides with the Suggs brothers, men who rob and murder settlers. Call and Gus catch them and hang them. Jake accepts his fate with more dignity than I expected from him. He gives Newt his pacing horse and asks the old friends he has betrayed not to hold it against him. The scene is sad, but not sentimental. Jake is responsible for his own collapse, even if he was always more foolish and weak than evil.

Gus's death is the wound the book leaves open. He refuses to have his remaining leg amputated, knowing the infection will kill him. Call wants to save him, but Gus's decision is not just vanity. He cannot imagine surviving as half the man he was. He asks Call to carry his body back to Texas and bury him at the place he once visited with Clara. Call does it, across hundreds of miles, through hostile country and his own exhaustion. It is the most important act of love Call is capable of making, even though he still cannot say the things he should have said while Gus was alive.

The ending is bleak without being empty. Call returns Gus's body to the Guadalupe, but the old world is gone. Lonesome Dove is nearly abandoned. The Dry Bean saloon has burned down, Xavier died in it after losing Lorena, and the people Call and Gus once knew have scattered or died. Call rides into the ruins and finds Bolivar still beating the broken dinner bell. It is a fitting final image. The sound continues, although the life that gave it meaning has mostly disappeared.

I admired Lonesome Dove more than I enjoyed every part of it. At over a thousand pages, it repeats some patterns, especially the men's talk about women, Indians and work. Several characters are introduced only to suffer or die, and the book sometimes treats cruelty as part of the landscape rather than examining it closely. The treatment of Native people is also morally uneven. McMurtry shows the violence of settlement and gives individual Native characters dignity, but the novel remains shaped by the assumptions of the men who are taking the land.

Even with those reservations, this is a major novel because it makes its central question unavoidable: what happens to people whose purpose has ended but who keep acting as if it has not? Call keeps working, Gus keeps talking, Lorena keeps moving, Clara keeps managing and Newt keeps trying to become someone his father can acknowledge. The trail goes on because nobody knows what else to do. By the end, the cattle have reached Montana, but the journey has not delivered the promised new life. It has only shown the characters what they were carrying all along.

READER 05 OF 9

A Long Way to Find Out What People Owe Each Other

Jessica Brown

Jessica Brown, 48

14 reviews on RNKD

WOULD RECOMMEND Finished the book

SPOILERS This review discusses the whole book, including how it ends.

The practical question in Lonesome Dove is not whether a person can survive hardship. Most of these people survive hardship because they have no alternative, and because somebody has to keep the horses watered, the cattle moving, and the dead buried. The harder question is what they owe one another after years of shared danger. Do you owe a friend your loyalty when he has made a reckless choice? Do you owe a child the truth about his father? Does responsibility still mean anything when the work has outlived the reason for doing it?

Larry McMurtry gives those questions more than eight hundred pages, several thousand cattle, a number of horses with stronger opinions than some of the men, a bear, a river full of snakes, a catastrophic hailstorm, a great many whorehouses, and enough deaths to make a person wonder whether the western frontier had any human resources department at all. I finished the book. I also paused more than once to ask whether anyone in it had considered a schedule, a backup plan, or the possibility that riding into danger with no water was not a personality trait.

I am glad I stayed. Lonesome Dove is long, but its length is not the main problem. The book is long because McMurtry wants to show how a life is built out of repeated habits, small loyalties, old injuries, bad decisions, jokes that are no longer funny, and duties that continue after the original purpose has disappeared. The cattle drive is the visible story. Underneath it, the book is about people who do not know how to stop being the person they became in an earlier part of life.

That is Captain Call in particular. He has spent most of his adult life being the man who decides what happens next. He was a Texas Ranger, and his authority made sense when settlers needed protection from Comanches and bandits. In Lonesome Dove, though, the war is mostly over. He and Augustus McCrae run a failing livery and cattle operation with a roofless barn, an unfinished well, unreliable horses, and a cook who may be stealing goats. Call still behaves as if every ordinary task were a military operation. He works until dark because work is the only language he speaks fluently.

His decision to drive cattle to Montana is therefore less a business plan than an attempt to give his life a new assignment. Augustus sees this immediately and says it to him repeatedly, usually in a way that would not improve the conversation. Call insists he is going north to run cattle. Augustus understands that Call is going because he has run out of reasons to remain where he is. The distinction matters. A person can call something a plan because the alternative is admitting that he feels lost.

Call is not an easy man to like, but he is compelling because the book never confuses competence with goodness. He is brave, disciplined, and reliable in a crisis. He is also emotionally evasive, controlling, and capable of turning another person's needs into an inconvenience. His treatment of Newt is especially painful. He notices the boy's work and relies on his abilities, but he withholds the one piece of information Newt most needs. Newt spends years wondering whether Jake Spoon might be his father while Call knows the truth, or at least knows enough to act responsibly.

Call's failure with Maggie is the moral center of his character. He visits her when she is a vulnerable young prostitute, develops some attachment to her, and then refuses to acknowledge what she needs from him. He will risk his life against armed men, but he cannot sit in a room and say her name. After her death, he brings Newt into the Hat Creek outfit without claiming him. He feeds the boy, trains him, and gives him work. He does not give him an honest answer.

That is not a small omission. It is the kind of decision that looks tidy to the person making it and leaves another person carrying the confusion for years. I see versions of this at work, although usually with fewer guns and no one being dragged behind a horse. A manager avoids one uncomfortable conversation, then calls the resulting confusion a performance problem when the employee does not know what is expected. Call does the same thing on a larger emotional scale. He treats silence as if it were neutral. It is not. Silence has consequences, and the person with less authority usually pays them.

Newt's eventual discovery is therefore not a clean triumph. Augustus tells him that Call is his father, but Call does not. When Newt asks whether Call dislikes him, Augustus gives an explanation, not a solution. Call is committed to an image of himself as a man governed by duty. Acknowledging Newt would force him to admit that he once wanted something outside that image. He would rather leave the boy with uncertainty than revise his opinion of himself.

Newt's response is one of the book's most believable reactions. He does not immediately feel grateful or proud. He feels cheated. He has spent his life waiting for information everyone else apparently had. I appreciated that the book resists turning this into a sentimental reconciliation. Call gives Newt his horse, his rifle, and his father's watch, then leaves without saying the words. Those gifts matter, but they are not the same as an explanation. A watch is not an apology.

Augustus, meanwhile, is the reason the book stays readable through its bleakest stretches. He talks constantly, drinks steadily, argues for the pleasure of arguing, and firmly believes that nearly every problem can be improved by a card game or a better breakfast. He is funny, but the book is careful not to make him merely comic. His jokes are often how he avoids saying what he feels. He makes fun of Call because Call's silence is painful to him. He talks about Clara because he has never accepted that she chose someone else. He makes light of death because he has seen too much of it to pretend it is fair.

Augustus is also capable of seeing people clearly when he chooses to. He understands that Jake Spoon is charming but unreliable. He sees that Lorena has been trained to expect very little from men and mistakes self-protection for strength. He knows Call's discipline is partly fear. Yet Augustus is not an innocent observer. He encourages Call's Montana plan, brings Lorena into the drive, and helps create the conditions under which several people suffer. He spots other people's weaknesses more easily than his own. That is familiar behavior, although most people do it without a six-shooter and a cattle herd.

Lorena's story is the hardest part of the book to read. McMurtry gives her interior life, which matters, but he also places her in repeated scenes of sexual coercion and violence described with a bluntness that can feel deliberately punishing. Her silence is not a decorative mystery. It is the result of being treated as an object for so long that speech has stopped feeling useful. Jake briefly convinces her that she can become someone's chosen person, and she mistakes his attention for protection. She is not foolish for wanting to believe him. She has been given almost no evidence that a woman can want a life and receive one.

Her kidnapping by Blue Duck is horrifying, not because the novel needs to remind us that the frontier was violent, but because Lorena has already spent her life being treated as available property. Blue Duck sells her, gambles her, and leaves her to men who discuss her as if she were livestock. The most disturbing thing is that she survives without becoming a different kind of person. She does not emerge with a speech about resilience. She is damaged, quiet, and gradually able to accept kindness from Clara and the girls. That felt more honest than a dramatic transformation would have.

Clara Allen is the character I most wanted to keep reading about. She has built a household, a horse business, and a life in a place that offers women very little margin for error. She is practical, funny, sharp-tongued, and not interested in pretending that marriage automatically makes a man wise. Her house runs because she knows what needs to happen and who needs to do it. She also carries grief that has not made her gentle. The deaths of her sons and Bob's long illness have changed her, but they have not erased her capacity for work or affection.

Her response to Call is one of the book's clearest judgments. She tells him that a living son matters more than a dead friend. He cannot hear it because he is still committed to the idea that keeping a promise is always honorable, even when the promise requires him to abandon a responsibility. Call does eventually take Gus's body to Texas, but the trip does not make him noble. It makes him someone who can complete one obligation while continuing to fail another.

The ending is devastating because it refuses to treat death as a conclusion that organizes everything neatly. Gus dies, but his voice remains in the choices other people make. Deets dies because a starving young Indian cannot understand that the men in front of him mean no harm. Jake dies because charm and luck eventually stop being enough. The people left behind keep working, arguing, raising children, and carrying on. There is no final accounting in which everyone receives exactly what they deserve.

I was especially affected by the contrast between Gus's requested burial and Call's return to the wreckage of Lonesome Dove. Call carries the coffin thousands of miles because that is the promise he can keep. The old sign, once a joke about horses, prices, pigs, and Augustus's uncertain Latin, becomes a marker for a dead friend. The business is gone. The town is changed. Bolivar is still beating the bell. Nothing has been preserved except the obligation to remember.

Lonesome Dove is not a tidy book about friendship, and it is not a simple celebration of the West. It shows the damage done by men who confuse endurance with virtue and movement with purpose. It also shows why people remain loyal to them. Call can lead men through danger. Augustus can make a miserable night bearable. Deets can find water. Clara can keep a household alive. Newt can learn. These abilities matter, even when the people who possess them are emotionally careless.

The book is too long in places. Some secondary stories repeat the same point after it has already landed, and the violence becomes so frequent that the emotional effect sometimes flattens. I also grew tired of the men treating every woman as a problem to be solved through possession, rescue, marriage, or payment. The novel understands that this is part of its world, but understanding it does not make it pleasant to read.

Still, the length ultimately earned its keep. By the end, the losses felt cumulative rather than decorative. The people who died were not only plot developments. They were part of the daily structure of the group, which meant that each death changed the practical life of everyone left behind. Someone had to cook. Someone had to scout. Someone had to explain the next task to a frightened boy. Someone had to bury the body.

That is what Lonesome Dove ultimately became for me: a book about the obligations that remain after the romance of a life has worn off. The drive to Montana is presented as an adventure, but much of it is labor, weather, injury, bad planning, and people discovering that the person they trusted is not who they thought. The work continues anyway. I finished the book tired, sad, and more impressed by the ordinary acts of care than by the gunfights. That tracks.

READER 06 OF 9

The Drive Is the Point

Michael Davis

Michael Davis, 44

11 reviews on RNKD

WOULD RECOMMEND Finished the book

SPOILERS This review discusses the whole book, including how it ends.

I finished Lonesome Dove, and I'm glad I did, though I won't pretend it needed every page it used to get there. This is a very long novel about two former Texas Rangers, the cattle drive they organize from the Rio Grande to Montana, and the men and women pulled into their orbit. It has horses, Indians, whores, card games, storms, rivers, buffalo, grizzlies, fever, bad decisions, worse decisions, and a large number of people discovering that the land does not care about their plans.

The central relationship is between Augustus McCrae and Woodrow Call, and the book works because McMurtry understands that they are not simply opposites. Augustus talks, drinks, jokes, flirts, cheats at cards, and treats almost every serious situation as an opportunity to make a remark. Call works, plans, watches, and treats almost every emotional problem as something to be avoided by riding farther. Augustus appears loose but sees more than he admits. Call appears disciplined but spends much of his life hiding from the consequences of his own choices.

That contrast is not just a character exercise. It is the engine of the novel. Call wants to drive cattle to Montana because he needs a purpose larger than maintaining a livery stable in a town that has already outlived its useful work. Augustus goes because he understands that Call is trying to outrun a life he does not know how to live. The cattle drive is supposed to be a business venture, but it is also a last campaign, a new war for a man who no longer has a war. Call needs the trip to mean something. Augustus knows it probably will not.

The book is at its best when it deals with work in specific terms. It understands that a cattle drive is not just men on horseback moving in a direction. It is branding, remuda management, water, access, bad ground, tired animals, weather, food, equipment, and the constant question of who answers for it when the plan does not survive contact with the day. The first crossing of the Nueces is a good example. The crew has already survived a sandstorm, lightning, rain, and exhaustion, and then Sean O'Brien rides into a nest of water moccasins. No heroic preparation could have prevented it. The men simply encounter a danger they did not know was there, and the boy dies.

That scene changed the way I read the drive. Before it, the journey still had the energy of an adventure story. After it, every river became a question about competence versus luck. The characters can prepare, scout, assign jobs, and carry weapons, but none of that guarantees a safe crossing. They can do the operational work correctly and still lose a boy in the water. That felt more honest than the usual frontier story in which skill solves every problem.

McMurtry also gives the work a cost. Sean dies. Bill Spettle is struck by lightning. Deets is killed by a young Indian trying to rescue a starving family from the sight of a stolen horse. Jake Spoon is hanged by the men he once rode with. Augustus loses a leg and then dies from the infection. The deaths are not arranged to make the drive noble. Most of them feel abrupt, unfair, and poorly timed, which is exactly how death usually feels to the people who remain. The living still have to move cattle, cook breakfast, bury the dead, and decide whether to go on.

Deets's death affected me most. He is one of the quietest people in the book, but his competence shows in every practical situation. He knows distances, water, tracks, weather, and the difference between a real threat and a shadow. He is also the person who understands Newt best. His death is not only an emotional loss. The outfit has lost the man who knows how to read the country. Call's inscription on the grave is one of the few moments when his private respect becomes public. The wording is plain, almost like a work record, but that is why it lands. Call cannot make a speech. He can write down what Deets did and hope the facts carry the feeling.

The novel is less successful with some of its treatment of women. Lorena's story is powerful in parts, especially because the book shows how much of her life has been shaped by men making decisions for her and then calling those decisions protection. Her silence is not a gimmick. It is the result of being used, traded, threatened, and expected to remain available. When Gus talks to her instead of simply taking from her, he gives her room to exist as a person. That matters.

But the book also spends a lot of time placing Lorena inside male arguments about what she represents. Gus wants her, Jake wants to possess her, Dish wants to save her, Xavier wants to marry her, and Blue Duck wants to sell her. Even when Lorena is central, men are often still discussing her as a problem to solve. The novel knows this is wrong, but it does not always escape the pattern itself. The violence against her is not ornamental, and the aftermath is handled with more seriousness than I expected. Still, the reading experience is difficult because so many men treat her body and future as an operational question.

Clara is the strongest counterweight to that treatment. She is not presented as an easy woman. She is sharp, impatient, capable, and tired of men confusing control with love. She knows exactly what Augustus is and does not let his charm erase the years he failed to show up. Her relationship with him is more convincing than any romance in the book because she refuses to give him the response he wants. She can love him, miss him, and still tell him that he is a selfish man. That is a cleaner form of affection than the book gives most of its couples.

July Johnson's story is another example of how the novel handles people who are not prepared for the lives they have chosen. He is not stupid. He is simply slow, dutiful, and poorly equipped for the scale of his own problems. He follows Jake because it is his job, then follows Elmira because she is his wife, and spends most of the journey discovering that duty does not tell him what to do next. His encounter with Roscoe, Janey, and Joe turns into a chain of failures he cannot repair. By the time he finds Elmira, she has no interest in being found. He has spent months moving toward an answer that cannot give him relief.

The ending is not a clean resolution. Augustus dies in Montana and asks Call to carry him back to Texas, to the place where Clara once took him on picnics. Call does it, even though the request is unreasonable and physically difficult. He arrives too late to preserve the relationship Gus imagined, but he keeps the promise. He also fails, one more time, to tell Newt that he is the boy's father. That failure is the book's final judgment on Call. He can carry a corpse thousands of miles, fight Indians, organize a cattle drive, and survive conditions that would kill most men. He cannot say one honest sentence to his son.

I understand why Call stays silent, but I do not excuse it. His sense of duty is real, and so is his cowardice. The novel is strongest when it refuses to separate those qualities. Call is admirable at the job he has chosen and damaging in the parts of life he refuses to acknowledge. Augustus sees this clearly, but his own talking and joking do not save him from the same general problem. He understands people better than Call does, but understanding is not the same as doing the right thing.

The book is too long, too repetitive, and occasionally too pleased with its own grotesque frontier details. Some digressions are memorable, while others feel like McMurtry refusing to remove anything from the truck. The side characters give the novel its texture, but the texture sometimes becomes clutter. I also reached a point where another discussion of whores, drowning, or Indian fighting felt less like development and more like another three-weekend job that had somehow become a year.

Still, the length eventually becomes part of the argument. The drive is not a clean plot moving toward a clean destination. It is days of repetition interrupted by weather, death, hunger, argument, and an occasional moment of beauty. The cattle are not symbols so much as obligations. Someone has to keep them moving, whether the men understand why or not.

I finished Lonesome Dove because I wanted to know whether the drive would succeed. I stayed because I wanted to know what success would cost. The answer is almost everything that mattered to these people. That is a heavy book to spend time with, but it is an honest one.

READER 07 OF 9

A Long Ride Into the Empty Part of the Heart

Omer Friedman

Omer Friedman, 22

8 reviews on RNKD

DEPENDS Finished the book

SPOILERS This review discusses the whole book, including how it ends.

I finished this book. That's not the same as saying it always respected my time. Lonesome Dove is enormous, and it is also one of the few enormous novels where the length eventually feels like part of the argument. This is a story about a cattle drive from the Rio Grande to Montana, but it cares more about what happens when men who know how to fight, work, and travel run out of the old reasons for doing those things. The cattle are important. The rivers, Indians, storms, horses, and distances are important. But the real subject is what remains of people after the life that gave them a purpose has already ended.

There are major spoilers in this review, including the ending.

The opening gets almost everything right. Augustus McCrae comes out on a porch and sees blue pigs eating a rattlesnake. The detail is funny, practical, and slightly disgusting. It tells you immediately what kind of world this is. A snake is food, the pigs are a nuisance, the heat is a problem, and the men are already carrying thirty years of habits into a town that no longer needs them. Augustus talks because he enjoys talking. Woodrow Call works because work is the only identity he trusts. Pea Eye, Deets, Newt, Bolivar, and the rest of the Hat Creek outfit live inside that arrangement.

The contrast between Augustus and Call drives the book for a long time. Augustus sees that Call is not really a giant, even though everyone treats him as one. Call sees Augustus as a man who can turn anything into a joke, including danger and responsibility. Their arguments are entertaining because they are not just comic interruptions. They are the way each man avoids admitting what he needs from the other. Call needs Augustus to make life less narrow. Augustus needs Call to give shape to his wandering. Neither one can say this directly, so they argue about pigs, food, horses, shade, women, Latin, and whether a sign should say "We Don't Rent Pigs."

The sign is one of the book's best objects because it shows the whole Hat Creek philosophy in one ugly piece of wood. Call wants a practical business sign. Augustus adds names, services, warnings, and a Latin motto he cannot translate. The result is not efficient, but it is alive. Call wants things to mean what they say. Augustus wants them interesting enough to make somebody stop. I recognized this difference immediately. Call looks at a horse's behavior and asks whether it can do the job. Augustus looks at the same horse and asks whether it has a personality worth arguing with. I generally trusted Call's judgment about equipment, but I would rather sit beside Augustus at supper, even if his food was terrible and his conversation never ended.

The novel is strongest when it treats the frontier as work rather than scenery. Cattle have to be found, branded, moved, watered, and protected. Horses go lame. Wagons break. Food is burned, spoiled, or made from whatever is available. A river is not a symbol until after it has killed someone. A storm is not beautiful if you are naked in the mud and trying to keep a herd from scattering. The book understands that cost is part of every plan. Montana is not just a dream of open land. It means months of work, no guarantee of water, unpredictable weather, hostile encounters, and the possibility that the people who arrive will not have the strength or judgment to settle there.

That practical attention is also why the deaths hit so hard. Sean O'Brien's death in the Nueces River is the scene that changed the book for me. The crossing initially looks manageable, then the water is suddenly full of moccasins. Sean is bitten again and again while the men try to pull him out. His brother Allen blames himself. Newt cries, vomits, and cannot stop thinking about how Sean wanted to return to Ireland. There is no heroic meaning attached to it. Sean does not die because he lacked courage. He dies because the river happened to contain a nest of snakes. The drive goes on because it has to. The grave is shallow, the song is unfinished, and the cattle still need to cross.

That pattern repeats. The journey keeps asking whether effort can protect anyone. The answer is no, not reliably. Bill Spettle is killed by lightning. A wagon breaks and nearly kills Lippy. Horses are lost to accidents, exhaustion, and animals stronger than they are. Deets dies because a starving young Indian misreads an attempt to help as an attack. Jake is hanged because he chooses to ride with killers, but his end is not presented as a clean moral lesson. He is weak, careless, and selfish, but he is also someone these men loved. When Call and Augustus hang him, the scene is quiet and painful. Jake says he would rather be hanged by his friends than by strangers. That is the closest he comes to understanding what he has thrown away.

Deets's death hurt more. He is the person in the group who pays attention without needing to announce his intelligence. He tracks, scouts, notices weather, hears what others miss, and helps people without making them feel foolish. When he is killed, Call's entire working system loses its balance. The inscription Call carves on Deets's grave is awkward, incomplete, and sincere. It is also one of the few times Call tries to put his feelings into words. He writes that Deets served with him for thirty years, fought in twenty-one engagements, was cheerful in all weather, and never shirked a task. It is not a speech, but Call has never had anything better to give.

The women in the novel are not all equally well handled, and I have to be honest about that. Lorena is compelling, but much of her early story is filtered through men's desire for her, which can be exhausting. Her beauty is treated as a force that changes every room she enters. At the same time, the book gives her a silence that is not simple passivity. She has learned that speaking often makes men demand more from her. Her relationship with Jake is based on a false promise, but not only because Jake lies. Lorena wants to believe in escape so badly that she turns him into the person who can provide it. When Blue Duck takes her, the novel becomes brutally difficult to read. The violence is not decorative, and the aftermath matters. Lorena's withdrawal from speech is a believable response to being treated as property by men who believe they have bought her.

Clara is different. She is practical, direct, difficult, and capable of making men uncomfortable without raising her voice. Her house in Nebraska is one of the few places in the novel where care is organized into daily work. Children are fed, horses are treated, a dying husband is cleaned, and a strange baby is kept alive. Clara is not sentimental about any of it. She knows that love does not prevent death, and she refuses to confuse marriage with permanent obligation. Her criticism of Call near the end is one of the clearest judgments in the book. He has spent his life calling duty a virtue while using duty to avoid personal responsibility.

This becomes most obvious in his treatment of Newt. Call is almost certainly Newt's father, and Augustus knows it. The reader knows it. Newt suspects it. Call still refuses to say it. When Augustus finally tells Newt, it does not feel like a satisfying revelation. It feels late and unfair, because Newt has spent his life trying to earn approval from a man who has already decided not to acknowledge him. Call gives Newt the Hell Bitch, his rifle, and his father's watch, but he still cannot give him his name. He would call that restraint. It looks like cowardice wearing the mask of principle.

The ending makes the whole journey sadder rather than more triumphant. The ranch in Montana is established, but Call is no longer sure what he is doing. Deets is dead. Jake is dead. Augustus is dead. The surviving men have to continue without the people who made the Hat Creek outfit what it was. Call carries Augustus's body back to Texas because he promised. It is a ridiculous, costly, necessary task. By the time he finally buries Augustus near the Guadalupe, the original sign is almost destroyed. The business, the partnership, the old lawmen, and the jokes have all worn away. Only the obligation remains.

That is why the book ultimately became a book about the difference between usefulness and meaning. Call can keep people moving, but he cannot explain why they should move. Augustus can explain almost anything, but explanation does not prevent loss. The cattle drive reaches Montana, but the destination does not repair anyone. A new life begins on top of graves, mistakes, and unfinished conversations.

I have complaints. The novel repeats some patterns too often. Characters are frequently introduced through their habits and then returned to those habits until the point is obvious. The violence against women is sometimes described with a directness that feels less like insight than punishment. The book also lets certain men remain charming after choices that should permanently change how we see them. Jake is a good example. I understand why Augustus and Call love him, but I did not always understand why the novel wanted me to keep making room for him.

Still, the scale is earned more often than not. The long middle sections make the ending hurt because the people have become familiar in the irritating way real companions become familiar. You know who will complain, who will lie, who will work, who will get lost, and who will say something funny when nobody wants to laugh. By the time the book ended, I felt that the journey had not taken me to a new world. It had taken me through the process of watching an old world disappear.

I would recommend Lonesome Dove to readers who can tolerate a very long novel that refuses to hurry toward its emotional conclusions. It is not a clean adventure story, and it is not a simple celebration of the West. It is a story about men who mistake motion for purpose, women who survive the consequences, and a landscape that does not care whether anyone understands what it is doing. The final judgment is severe but simple: the drive succeeds, and almost everything that made it worth taking is destroyed along the way.

READER 08 OF 9 Did not finish

I Had Enough of the Dust and the Talking

Robert Martinez

Robert Martinez, 67

7 reviews on RNKD

Did not finish Did not finish · stopped approximately 40% through

SPOILERS This review discusses the whole book, including how it ends.

I stopped reading Lonesome Dove at approximately forty pages, shortly after Jake Spoon returns to Lonesome Dove and the Hat Creek outfit starts talking about going north. The book was available in full. This is my decision, not a problem with the copy. I have seen the miniseries, and I came to the novel thinking I already knew the general shape of the story. That was probably part of the problem. I knew where the talk was headed, and the book took its time getting there.

The opening has real ability in it. McMurtry knows how to make a place feel hot, dry, and uncomfortable without stopping to explain the weather in a separate paragraph. The first scene has Augustus McCrae coming onto the porch while his pigs are eating a rattlesnake. That is a good introduction to the town and to Augustus. The pigs are not just an odd detail. They establish the heat, the lack of water, the roughness of the place, and Augustus's habit of finding something to say about everything. He worries more about the pigs being on the porch than about the snake. That tells you what kind of man he is before he has much chance to announce it.

The Hat Creek Cattle Company is not much of a company yet. The barn has no roof, the well is unfinished, the cook is a former Mexican bandit who serves goat and beats a dinner bell with a broken crowbar, and half the operation seems to consist of men repairing things that should have been repaired years ago. I understood these people. Not because I have lived in a livery stable, but because I know the type of work where one person keeps a place running through improvisation while another keeps finding more work to do. Captain Call is always working, or preparing to work, or looking for something he can work on. Augustus is usually sitting down, drinking whiskey, and making remarks about the man who is working.

That part is good. Call and Augustus are not interchangeable old cowboys. Call is all duty and momentum. Augustus is appetite, talk, and delay. Call thinks being useful is enough to justify a life. Augustus thinks a life with no pleasure is a bad bargain, even if the work gets done. Their arguments are funny because neither man is completely wrong. Call does get things done. Augustus does notice what Call is refusing to notice. The trouble is that Augustus talks so much that I began to feel the author standing behind him, waiting for another joke.

That is where my patience started to wear out. The book has a strong eye for physical detail, but it also seems determined to give every unpleasant detail a full service call. A barber loses a leg to centipedes, a doctor gets shot while trying to remove a bug from a vaquero's ear, Bolivar may be stealing goats, Lippy has a hole in his stomach, and nearly every meal involves beans, grease, insects, or some question about which animal is going to be eaten next. One or two of those details establish the place. After several, I started wondering if the book trusted its setting to hold my attention without adding another grotesque story.

The humor is uneven for me. Some of Augustus's exchanges are sharp. His argument that pigs are smarter than horses and most people is the kind of foolish claim a person makes just to irritate a friend, and Call's refusal to let go of the old barn roof argument is funny because he has saved the grievance for years. The sign for the Hat Creek Cattle Company is another good example. Augustus keeps adding information until it includes horses, cattle, goats, donkeys, pigs, and a Latin motto he cannot translate. Call's objection is practical: the sign does not help the business and may make them look crazy. Augustus's objection is also practical in its own way: he wants people to know that somebody there can spell.

But the book often turns suffering into the same kind of joke. Dillard's ruined leg, the doctor's death, the sexual history of Lorena, and the way men discuss women are treated with a casualness that I did not find as entertaining as the author seemed to expect. This is not a complaint that an old Western must be polite. It is a complaint about repetition and tone. The people in this town are surrounded by violence, poverty, ignorance, and death, but the narration keeps finding one more amusing angle. After a while I stopped laughing and started feeling worn down.

Lorena is the point where the book became harder for me to continue. Her history is grim. She was taken from one man to another, abused, sold, and pushed into prostitution because she had few choices and no protection. The book is clear enough about the fact that the men who used her were cruel. It also gives her a strong silence. She is not simply a cheerful Western saloon girl waiting for a handsome cowboy. She wants to get to San Francisco because it represents a place that might be cool, clean, and different from the life she has known.

I understood that part. What I did not enjoy was the amount of time the book spends describing the sexual business around her. Augustus is presented as kinder than the other men, and in many ways he is. He talks to her, listens when she chooses to speak, and pays her fairly. Still, he also talks about her body and treats the arrangement as a subject for jokes and card games. The book seems to want me to see the tenderness underneath the ugliness. I saw it, but I also saw the ugliness, and I did not want to spend more evenings with it.

Newt is the character who made me consider continuing. He is seventeen, works hard, has no clear family, and wants to become a real cowboy. He looks up to Call, even though Call rarely offers him a kind word. He also watches Dish Boggett, imagines going north, and worries about whether he is good enough to be taken along. His wish to wear a gun and be treated as a man is simple, but McMurtry makes it feel important. Newt is not foolish. He is inexperienced, which is different. He notices who is kind to him and who merely uses him for labor.

Call's nightly walk along the river also interested me. He knows Lonesome Dove no longer needs protecting, but he keeps walking because the old work has left a habit in him. He is still acting like a captain after the war and the Rangers are gone. The job has become smaller, but he has not changed with it. That is a solid character problem. He has a purpose, but it is a purpose left over from another life.

Then Jake Spoon arrives, which is where I stopped. He has the confidence of a man who has escaped consequences by luck and charm. He brings news of Montana, a dead dentist, and the promise of another great adventure. Newt remembers him as a generous and exciting man, but Call and Augustus can see the weakness under the reputation. Jake may be brave when the story goes his way. I was not convinced he would be there when the work started.

There is enough here to explain why people value the novel. The setting is specific, the central friendship is well drawn, and the practical work of horses, water, food, weapons, and travel gives the opening weight. I also understand why somebody who enjoys long talk, rough humor, and slow character development would keep going.

I did not keep going. The book was not boring in the ordinary sense. It was busy, vivid, and often funny. My problem was that the same mixture kept repeating: a useful detail, a good character exchange, then another grotesque incident or sexual joke that I had no interest in hearing. I had seen enough of Augustus, Call, Newt, Lorena, and Jake to know what kind of book this was. The road to Montana may be where the novel truly earns its reputation. I cannot judge that part, or the ending. I can say that the opening did not make me want to spend several more hundred pages in the company of these men. I put it down and had enough.

READER 09 OF 9

A Long Way to Go, and Nobody Has Written the Plan

Sarah Williams

Sarah Williams, 51

8 reviews on RNKD

WOULD RECOMMEND Finished the book

SPOILERS This review discusses the whole book, including how it ends.

I finished Lonesome Dove convinced that Captain Call needed an operations manager, Augustus needed someone to ration his whiskey, and the whole Hat Creek outfit needed a written plan with names beside the tasks. They leave Texas with more than two thousand cattle, a large remuda, a wagon, a mixed group of experienced hands and frightened young men, one woman, two pigs and no proper agreement about where they will stop, who owns what, or what happens if the whole plan fails. They have no sensible contingency for rivers, storms, illness, Indians, horse thieves, grief or the simple problem of getting everyone safely to Montana. They do have a captain, and Call believes that is nearly the same thing as a plan.

It is not. That is what makes the book both so compelling and so exasperating.

There are spoilers throughout, including the ending.

The opening is excellent. Augustus McCrae comes out onto the porch while pigs eat a rattlesnake, and within a few pages we understand the whole operation. The place is hot, badly built, short of supplies and held together by habit. Call works until dark because working gives him purpose. Augustus drinks, talks, provokes arguments and notices everything Call refuses to notice. Pea Eye is loyal and capable. Deets is the person who quietly understands what is actually happening. Newt is young, under-educated and desperate to become useful. Bolivar cooks badly and hits the dinner bell because he wants to, not because the men need feeding.

The practical details are what made the book work for me at first. This is a novel full of jobs. Someone has to dig the well, mend the harness, find water, hold the herd, count the horses, deal with the wagon, patch the trousers and make sure the men eat. McMurtry understands that a life is not made only of dramatic decisions. It is made of repeated tasks, many of them badly paid and barely noticed. The Hat Creek Cattle Company has a sign listing what it sells and rents, including the memorable declaration that it does not rent pigs. The sign becomes an early record of the outfit's personality. Augustus wants to add information, ornament and Latin. Call wants people to know the business exists. Even the sign becomes an argument about whether usefulness is enough or whether a man needs recognition as well.

I am not usually impressed by a title that gives somebody authority without making them responsible for the result, and Call is a particularly striking example. He is brave, disciplined and often exactly the person you want beside you when a situation turns violent. He can read a landscape, organise men and keep moving when everybody else is frightened. But he is also rigid, emotionally evasive and incapable of admitting that duty is not a complete human life. He treats work as proof of moral worth. His response to every uncertainty is to work harder and give another order. When there is no troop and no war, he keeps behaving as if he is still a captain responsible for a company of Rangers. He cannot retire from the role because he has never built an identity outside it.

Augustus sees this clearly and says so, usually while drinking. His talk is funny because it is specific. He can turn a broken roof, a bad cook, a pig, a woman, a Latin motto or a man's unsuitable hat into an argument. Sometimes the jokes are genuinely funny. Sometimes he repeats the same idea for so long that I wanted somebody to take the jug away. He is generous and vain, brave and selfish, perceptive and careless. He is also the character who keeps the novel alive when the cattle are moving slowly and the landscape has become a large amount of grass between one problem and the next.

The book is at its best when those two men are being forced to confront the cost of the lives they have chosen. Call's guilt over Maggie, Newt's mother, is the emotional centre of the novel. He visited her, returned to her and then withdrew because he could not accept what wanting her meant. He could not accept that the boy might be his, because doing so would require him to acknowledge a failure that happened outside battle and outside duty. The scene in which Maggie asks him simply to say her name is more damaging than any gunfight. He understands what she needs and still chooses to leave. Call can protect settlements from Indians, but he cannot bear responsibility for one vulnerable woman who wants to be recognised as a person.

Newt's position in the outfit is therefore painful from the beginning. He works hard and receives almost no praise from Call. He studies the older men because he wants to learn what being a man means, but the examples are inconsistent. Call shows him discipline without affection. Augustus shows him affection without discipline. Jake Spoon shows him charm without reliability. Deets offers the most useful model because he notices what people need and helps without making a performance of it. His death is one of the most upsetting events in the book, partly because it happens through a failure of judgement. Deets is holding a blind, starving Indian child when another young warrior charges him. Call and Augustus hesitate because they think the boy will understand that Deets is helping. He does not. The boy kills him, and Deets dies still trying to protect the child.

That death also exposes the weakness in the novel's moral world. Call and Augustus have spent their lives killing Indians and calling it protection, law and order or necessary work. Augustus occasionally admits that the Rangers made it possible for banks, lawyers, cattlemen and settlers to take the land. He can see the contradiction. Call cannot. The novel does not turn either man into a modern moral commentator, which is one of its strengths. They remain men formed by their time, with partial understanding and considerable blood on their hands. But the book does sometimes let their charm do too much of the work. Their jokes can make the violence feel distant, even when the narrative later shows what that violence has done to other people.

Lorena's story is where that distance becomes impossible to maintain. She is not simply the beautiful woman everybody wants. She is a survivor who has learned silence because men have repeatedly treated her body, labour and attention as things available for purchase. Her wish to reach San Francisco is not a romantic dream in the usual sense. It is a wish for somewhere cool and far away, a place that has not yet been spoiled by the men who have used her. Jake promises to take her there because promises are easy for him to make. He enjoys being wanted and cannot tolerate being responsible.

The contrast between Jake and Augustus is important. Jake gives Lorena the impression that he can protect her, then leaves her to gamble. Augustus recognises that she is in danger but still treats the situation as something he can manage through confidence and a well-timed joke. He should take her into the camp. He knows this. He chooses not to because he thinks he understands the threat, and because Lorena does not want to go. His failure is not malicious, but it is still a failure. Blue Duck takes her, and the sections describing her captivity are among the hardest pages in the book. McMurtry does not turn the suffering into a neat lesson. Lorena loses her speech, her sense of safety and much of her connection to ordinary life. Augustus gets her back, but rescue does not restore what was taken.

This is also where the book's treatment of women becomes uneven. Clara Allen is a strong, intelligent and practical woman who has built a life in an environment designed to wear women down. She understands horses, money, grief and the difference between a man who is useful and one who merely looks important. Her refusal to be sentimental about Augustus is one of the best things in the novel. She sees his charm clearly and still refuses to make herself available to it. She also recognises that July Johnson is a decent man who has allowed his life to be organised around a woman who does not want him. Clara's bluntness is welcome because the novel often lets men describe women while women are expected to absorb the consequences.

July's journey is a separate tragedy. He begins by trying to catch Jake Spoon because it is his job and because Peach expects him to. Then Elmira leaves, and he spends much of the journey trying to catch up with a wife who has never wanted the life he offers. He is not a bad man. He is polite, loyal and incapable of understanding what people are telling him unless they say it directly. He loses Roscoe, Joe and Janey because he keeps pursuing one responsibility while failing to notice another. By the time he reaches Clara's ranch, he is too tired and damaged to know what to do. Clara's eventual proposal to wait a year before answering him is exactly right. She is not offering him a reward for being decent. She is requiring him to become more than a quiet man who waits for life to tell him what to do.

The ending is not a conventional triumph. Call reaches Montana, loses Gus, establishes a ranch and then carries Gus's body back to Texas because that is what he promised. The journey back is absurd, expensive and physically punishing. It is also the first thing Call does that is not really about law, work, land or reputation. He fulfils a promise to a friend who is no longer able to benefit from it. That is not the same as redemption. He still cannot say plainly that Newt is his son. He still leaves Newt without the explanation he deserves. But the failure is finally visible to him, even if he cannot speak it.

I found the last scene in Lonesome Dove especially bleak. Call returns to a town whose saloon has burned down because Xavier could not survive Lorena's departure. Bolivar is back, beating the dinner bell. Call is surrounded by remnants of the life he left and has no real place in it. The Hat Creek sign has almost disappeared, just as the company has. The work has not produced the settled future Call imagined. He has reached the end of the trail and discovered that the people who mattered most are dead, gone or beyond his reach.

Lonesome Dove is too long, too fond of repeating its own jokes and too willing to excuse men because they are entertaining. It also contains some of the strongest writing about work, loyalty, ageing, grief and the dangerous gap between being responsible for people and actually caring for them. I finished it tired, sad and impressed. For me, it ultimately became a book about men who can organise a cattle drive across a continent but cannot assign ownership of their own feelings. The work gets done. The paperwork never does.

Where they agreed

Eight of the nine reviewers finished it, and nearly all of them land on the same image: Call gives Newt his horse, his rifle, and his father's watch, but never his name, and that withheld word does more harm than any gunfight in the book. Daniel and Sarah both single out Clara as the character who says it plainly, telling Call that a living son matters more than a dead friend. Several also agree the novel runs long and repeats its points well past where they've already landed.

Where they split

David and Robert, who stopped forty pages in, are both unsettled by how the book handles Lorena's history, with David saying some scenes 'stop providing distance' and Robert citing the same material as a reason he quit. Daniel and James take Augustus's treatment of her, including the card game where he cheats her and then pays her fifty dollars, as evidence of a flawed but genuinely caring man rather than proof the book is careless with her.

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