When Nobody Is Left to Check the Count
Avi Mizrahi, 61
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SPOILERS This review discusses the whole book, including the ending.
The first thing I check in a story about collapse is the handoff before the problem. Who knows what? Who is responsible? Which rule is written down, and who is actually following it? Blindness is very interested in these questions, although it does not ask them in a tidy way. It takes an ordinary city, removes everyone's sight except one woman's, and then watches what happens when the people who are supposed to organise an emergency decide that protecting the public means locking sick people in a mental hospital and threatening to shoot them.
The first man goes blind while waiting at a red light. His blindness is not black but white, a milky brightness that leaves his eyes apparently healthy. A man offers to take him home, then steals his car and soon goes blind himself. The ophthalmologist who examines the first patient becomes blind later that night. His wife pretends to have lost her sight so that she can accompany him into quarantine. The group eventually includes the doctor, his wife, the first blind man, his wife, the girl with dark glasses, the boy with the squint, the old man with the black eyepatch, and others who arrive as the epidemic spreads.
That is the setup. It is simple enough to explain in one paragraph, but the book is not really about the medical mystery. We never receive a proper cause, diagnosis, or technical solution. The blindness is a pressure placed on a society that already believes it is organised. Once sight disappears, the forms remain for a while. There are instructions over a loudspeaker, food deliveries, military guards, separate wards, official language about solidarity and public safety. On paper, there is a process. In practice, people are hungry, frightened, fighting over beds and urinating in corridors.
That part worked for me immediately. Saramago understands that a system can fail while it keeps issuing instructions, not only when it stops functioning. The quarantine announcement is a good example. The government says the inmates must organise themselves, wash their own clothes, burn their leftovers, bury their dead, and accept that no outside help will come during illness, disorder, aggression, or fire. The language is formal and complete. It covers every item except the central fact that the people inside have been abandoned.
The soldiers are not presented as a complicated military force. They are scared men with rifles. That is enough. They shoot the wounded car thief when he tries to leave. Later they fire into a crowd of blind people who are trying to collect food. The official announcement describes this as the repression of a seditious movement. The soldiers were not responding to a real threat. They were responding to their own fear, then writing the fear into a report. I do not need a political theory to recognise this. If the report says the loading delay was caused by the warehouse, it does not matter that sales changed the address at 10:55. The paper can still put the fault somewhere else.
The doctor's wife is the reason the book remains readable. She can see, so she becomes the group's guide, cleaner, food finder, witness, and eventually its moral centre. Saramago does not make her pure. She is tired, frightened, angry, selfish at moments, and capable of violence. She watches people deteriorate while pretending not to see. She knows that if the others find out about her secret, they may turn her into their permanent servant. This is not an abstract fear. They already need her to find beds, count rations, locate toilets, collect medicine, bury bodies, and lead them through the city.
Her eyesight is useful, but it is also a punishment. She sees the filthy lavatories, the bodies, the blood, the infected leg of the car thief, the massacre outside the ward, and the women returning after the sexual violence imposed by the armed thugs. The blind can at least imagine that the world is not as bad as it is. She cannot. When she says that she wants to be blind, I believed her. Not because she wants to escape responsibility, but because seeing everything leaves her with no place to hide from it.
The worst section is the takeover by the blind thugs. They control the food, demand valuables, and then demand women. The book treats the sexual violence as a direct exercise of power, not a clever test of civilisation. The men with the gun exchange the women for food because they understand the basic arithmetic of hunger. The scene is difficult to read, and it should be. What bothered me is not that Saramago included it. The book has already shown that the guards, the government, and the inmates are willing to treat people as quantities. The sexual violence follows that logic. What bothered me is that the narration sometimes steps away from the women and starts explaining the moral meaning of the event when the event itself is already clear.
Saramago often trusts the reader and then immediately explains what the reader has just understood. A character does something cruel, and the narrator adds a paragraph about cruelty. A group shares food, and the narrator comments on the conditions that make solidarity possible. Someone makes a mistake, and the book tells us how the mistake should be interpreted. Some of these interruptions are sharp. Many are funny. Others slow the book down at exactly the point where the scene has enough force on its own.
The long sentences are another matter. They are not merely long because Saramago wants to show off. They imitate speech, memory, argument, and the confusion of people trying to think while the world is breaking apart. Dialogue is often mixed into the paragraph without quotation marks, with capitals doing the work of identifying a new speaker. At first I had to slow down and check who had signed each sentence. Later I understood the rhythm. Still, there were sections where the sentence kept adding one more explanation, one more qualification, one more proverb, one more turn, and I wanted somebody to stop the vehicle and check the route.
The proverbs are part of the book's method. People use them because inherited phrases give the impression of order. The characters quote sayings about hunger, patience, dead men's shoes, first come first served, and the country of the blind. The narrator then examines the saying, adjusts it, or shows how badly it fits the current situation. This is often effective because a proverb is a small piece of stored experience, and the people in the quarantine are trying to use old instructions in a new emergency. The problem is that the book sometimes repeats the correction after I have already understood it.
There is also a practical intelligence in the small details. The blind learn the number of their beds. They make a rope from torn blankets so people can find the food. They count steps, use walls as guides, distribute rations by bed number, and form groups to move through the city. The doctor's wife arranges people in rows and ties them together with strips of cloth. These are not heroic solutions. They are improvised handoffs. Somebody remembers the route. Somebody keeps the children close. Somebody knows which door opens into the courtyard. This is where the book is strongest, because it shows civilisation returning as a set of small procedures rather than as a speech about human goodness.
The group also becomes more decent without becoming innocent. The girl with dark glasses comforts the boy, shares food, and later chooses a relationship with the old man with the black eyepatch. The doctor's wife kills the leader of the thugs with scissors, then helps the other women escape. The old man defends the person who killed the thug because, in his words, that act preserved the last piece of dignity in the place. Nobody becomes clean. They remain capable of jealousy, lust, resentment, cowardice, and theft. They simply begin to understand that survival is not the same as living alone.
The city outside the quarantine is less dramatic than the asylum, which is exactly right. The government has collapsed, banks have been looted, hospitals are useless, shops are empty, streets are covered in rubbish and human waste, and groups of blind people move from building to building looking for food. The doctor and his wife find a supermarket basement full of food, but the people who rushed down there were trapped and died. The doctor tells his wife that everything they eat has been stolen from the mouths of others. She rejects the idea that she should carry imaginary guilt, but the point remains. In an emergency, even a useful act can have a cost that somebody else pays.
The image that stayed with me is the church where all the religious images have had their eyes covered. The doctor's wife can see the bandages and white paint over the eyes of Christ, the saints, the mother and child, the figures holding animals, weapons, books, and scales. The explanation is uncertain. Perhaps a priest did it. Perhaps someone else did. The result is clear enough. If the whole world is blind, the images cannot continue pretending to see. The scene makes the religious question practical rather than theological. What is the value of a watching authority when nobody is being protected?
The ending is quiet after all the violence. People begin to regain their sight in the same unexplained way that they lost it. The first blind man sees, then the girl with dark glasses, then the doctor. The others expect their turn. The doctor's wife looks out of the window and sees the city. Then the world goes white for her. She has not been rewarded for keeping the group alive. The blindness has not been solved. The final movement leaves the reader with the possibility that sight and moral understanding are not the same thing. The doctor says that perhaps they are blind people who can see but do not see. The doctor's wife does not give him a clean answer, because the book does not have one.
I finished Blindness with mixed feelings. I admire its control of the central situation, its attention to power, its refusal to treat institutions as automatically humane, and its understanding that the first real improvement in a disaster is usually not a grand solution but a reliable arrangement for sharing food. I also think the novel is too pleased with its own commentary. It repeats its moral conclusions, especially when the scenes have already proved them. The prose can be funny and precise in one paragraph, then exhausting in the next.
Still, the book earned its length more often than it wasted it. It is a test of what people do when nobody is able to check the count, verify the route, or confirm that the person in charge is telling the truth, not a mystery about why people go blind. The answer is not that everyone becomes an animal. Some do. Others organise beds, share water, bury the dead, wash one another in the rain, read aloud, and keep a child from getting lost. That is the work that remains, not a clean victory.
For this reviewer, Blindness is ultimately about responsibility after the official system has stopped accepting responsibility for anything. The doctor's wife sees because someone has to. She keeps going because the others cannot. When she finally admits that she is tired, the group does not become helpless. They have learned enough to carry some of the work themselves. That is the book's strongest point, and it is enough to justify the difficult pages, the crowded sentences, and the repeated instructions. Do not wait for the government, the soldiers, the doctor, or the loudspeaker to save you. First, find out who has the food, who signed for it, and who is willing to help carry it.