The Murder Mystery Is Fine. The Friendship Is the Point.
Emily Johnson, 29
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SPOILERS This review discusses the whole book, including how it ends.
Mabel Waller is eighty-one, six feet tall, and rude in a way that is mostly entertaining. She lives on Kenny Lane in Melbourne under the name Elsie Fitzpatrick. She finds her neighbour Ishaan dead on his kitchen floor, gets questioned because she was the one who found him, and then discovers that the media has connected his death to her own past. In 1959, at fifteen, Mabel was convicted of murdering her father. She was already known as Mad Mabel because people had decided that a lonely, intelligent, socially awkward girl must be dangerous. The new investigation into Ishaan's death turns her old story into public property again.
That setup worked for me right away. Mabel is funny, but not in a way that makes her harmless. She insults a child, a dog, her neighbours, two police officers, a paramedic, and several varieties of tea. She also notices exactly who is doing the work of keeping a household or a street functioning. When Ishaan dies, she climbs the fence, checks him, calls emergency services, deals with the dog, and then complains about all of it. The complaints are not a substitute for kindness. They are how she avoids having to announce that she cares.
The first section is very good at making an elderly woman's ordinary competence feel like part of the suspense. Mabel knows where everyone lives, who is avoiding whom, which neighbour buys unnecessary goods at Aldi, and which dog is going to leave a mess in her roses. She is also aware that her body is no longer as reliable as it used to be. She can still climb a fence, but she has to think about what happens after she gets over it. She can still live alone, but a broken wrist, a late-night intruder, and a child who needs help make that independence less theoretical.
I liked that tension. Mabel is not written as a sweet old lady who surprises everyone by having a sharp tongue. She is genuinely difficult. She is also lonely, and the book does not pretend those qualities are unrelated. She has built a life around not needing people, then spends the present-day story being forced to accept help from them. Peter brings her things from Aldi and stays with her in hospital. Joan reports her to the police, then gets her nephew to help once she realises the consequences have gone too far. Roxanne trusts Mabel with Persephone because she has no safe and affordable childcare. Persephone decides Mabel is her friend whether Mabel agrees or not.
That child could have been unbearable. Sometimes she is. Persephone enters Mabel's house, takes food, asks intrusive questions, steals arrowroot biscuits, refuses to go to bed, and calls her Elsa after being corrected repeatedly. Mabel's irritation is funny because it is specific. She is not making a general complaint about children. She is trying to put one actual child to sleep while the child requests additional stories, water, a stuffed animal, a toilet trip, and a back rub. The back rub lasting forty-five minutes is the kind of detail that makes the relationship believable. Nobody needs to explain why Mabel is exhausted. The book has already shown us.
The friendship between Mabel and Persephone is also where the novel's emotional argument becomes clear. Mabel was raised by adults who treated children as inconvenient extensions of their own lives. Her father blamed her for her baby sister's death, her mother could not protect her from him, and the adults around her let the story of Mad Mabel grow because it was easier than asking what had actually happened. Persephone, meanwhile, is being raised by a loving but exhausted mother who works nights and tries to stay away from an abusive former partner. Mabel recognises the danger of leaving a child alone, but she also understands why Roxanne did it. This is where the book is strongest. It gives the practical problem and the emotional problem at the same time.
I also appreciated that Roxanne's situation is not treated as a decorative subplot. Shane has isolated her, taken control of her money and transportation, violated an apprehended violence order, and uses Persephone as a way to reach her. The police repeatedly offer responses that are technically available and practically inadequate. Mabel's anger at this is more persuasive than the book's bigger speeches about justice. A restraining order is not protection if the person violating it keeps finding you and the system only tells you to call again after the next incident.
The present-day plot is less steady. Mabel's old case gives the book several strong questions. Did she kill her baby sister? Did she cause her mother's death? Did she kill her teacher, Mr Loukas? Did she murder her father and her aunt? The answers are arranged to make the reader revise Mabel's reputation several times. Her sister died from polio, although Mabel's father blamed her. Her mother died by suicide after a lifetime of abuse and betrayal. Mr Loukas was killed by his fiancée, after sexually exploiting Mabel and other students. Mabel did kill her father, after finding him standing over the body of her aunt Cess. The most important twist is that Daphne, Mabel's lifelong best friend, was not real in the ordinary sense. She was an imaginary friend who helped Mabel survive a childhood with almost no reliable affection.
I understand what the novel is trying to do with these reveals. Mabel has spent her entire life being described by other people, so the book lets her tell the story in her own voice. Whether she is guilty is not really the question. The harder question is whether a person can be reduced to the worst thing they did, the thing other people think they did, or the label they attached to her when she was a child. The story keeps returning to the way a community prefers a simple explanation. Mad Mabel is easier to understand than a lonely girl blamed for a sister's illness, abused by her father, exploited by a teacher, and left without an adult who could consistently protect her.
The problem is that the plotting sometimes treats emotional truth and legal truth as interchangeable. Mabel says her father killed everyone indirectly because he was poison. I understand the feeling. He creates the conditions for several tragedies, and he uses Mabel as a convenient container for the community's fear. But the book occasionally pushes too hard toward the neatness of that conclusion. Her father's murder is morally understandable. It is still murder. Her aunt's death is presented as something he caused, but Mabel does not have evidence that he killed her beyond what she saw and inferred. The novel wants the reader to accept that Mabel's interpretation is the deepest truth, even when the facts are messier.
The Daphne reveal caused a similar problem for me. It is emotionally effective, especially when Mabel says that an imaginary friend cannot be dismissed as unreal when she was the only friend Mabel had. That line earns its place. But the book has spent hundreds of pages presenting Daphne as a separate person who interacts with the neighbours, doctors, police and media. The ending then asks us to reinterpret all of those scenes through a psychological explanation that the story did not fully prepare. I was moved by what Daphne meant. I was less convinced by how the novel handled what she was.
There is also a lot of foreshadowing that is not subtle. The references to socks, the recurring use of Anne of Green Gables, the close attention to names, and the repeated insistence that friendship is oxygen all point toward the final explanation. That did not ruin the reading experience, because the book cares more about how Mabel survived than about whether I could guess the answer. Still, the mystery is not as twisty as the cover copy wants it to be. The emotional information is usually stronger than the investigative information.
The prose has the same unevenness. Mabel's insults are often excellent. Her description of a dog as a snarling footstool made me laugh. So did her assessment of the police officers she privately names Hairy and Baldy, and her concern that a young man's waistline might make him less attractive to women. But the book sometimes explains a joke after it has already landed, then explains the emotion underneath the joke. Mabel says what she feels, makes a joke about it, and then tells us what the joke was protecting. The repetition is understandable for a character who has spent a lifetime narrating herself, but it can make the writing feel over-managed.
I finished the book because I cared about Mabel, Persephone, Roxanne and the small group of neighbours who gradually stopped treating care as an embarrassing accident. The ending, with Mabel stepping in front of Persephone when Shane points a gun at her, is melodramatic. It is also consistent with the book's central idea that love is a choice made through action. Mabel has spent her life being told that she is dangerous. In the final crisis, she chooses exactly what kind of danger she is willing to face. Then the book gives us Persephone's perspective, including the revelation that her imaginary friend Daisy was Mabel's friend Daphne under another name. That is a little too neat, but I still found it affecting.
The Ishaan mystery resolves with a lethal vitamin overdose, which is probably the least interesting part of the ending. Mabel did not kill him. Her DNA was present because they were neighbours, because she found him, and because he scratched her. The investigation is mostly a machine for dragging Mabel's past into public view. Once that past is exposed, the plot has done what it needed to do. I was more interested in the fact that Mabel sells her house to protect the people on Kenny Lane, then realises that leaving would also hurt the child who has finally chosen her.
Mad Mabel is a thriller about murder that is most successful when it stops trying to be a thriller. Its best subject is not whether Mabel is guilty. It is what happens when a person who has been defined by isolation is finally surrounded by people who notice when she is missing, bring her flowers, sit with her in hospital, take her dog, feed her child, and object when she tries to leave. The book's final answer is that Mabel was not saved by innocence. She was saved by being known.
I had issues with the plotting, the psychiatric explanation, and the amount of information the book repeats after I already understood it. I also kept reading, which is the more useful fact. Mabel is funny, unpleasant, lonely, observant and loving in ways she would deny. I wanted to know what happened to her, but more importantly, I wanted to see who stayed.