Priya Nandakumar
Romance, fantasy, YA. Wants to feel something by chapter three.
The slow burn is slow and it burns.
Two rival caterers, one very long wedding season, and a book that trusts you to wait. Bloom writes tension like a person who's actually been in a kitchen. Four stars, with one real complaint about the third act I can only make behind a spoiler warning — see below.
SPOILERS — Priya on the third actShow / hide
The third-act breakup is caused by a misread text message. In a book this careful about how people actually talk in kitchens, that's a cheat, and it costs the ending about ten pages of trust it had earned.